Isekai ni Kanaderu Densetsu – 22

Well, I think there were still many strange or wrong sentence but, please bear and if possbile please correct it.

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  • Silver

    If you still plan to continue after this, The novel “next life” is quite similar to this, OP and Otherword

    • I do like the novel “Next Life” but no one continue to translate it yet. “Next Life” comes in 2nd 🙁 in survey/poll created by Neo Translations to which one they should translate.

  • Thanks for the chapter!

  • mongogodoftunder

    Great job you may have switched the MC name once otherwise your really efficient.

  • Anonymous

    Great job you may have switched the MC name once otherwise your really efficient.

  • Hi! You didn’t enable comments at the chapter so i am posting my quick grammar check here:

    Runoir that was crying while being hugged — Runoir who was crying while being hugged

    turned 15 years old, they was already considered as an adult — turned 15 years old, they were already considered an adult

    Since alcohol was self-responsibility, aside from baby, there was no age limitation for drank it. — Since alcohol was a self-responsibility, aside from babies, there was no age limitation for drinking it.

    The reason was, there was a lot of case when a youth that tried to drank alcohol, then went outside town while being excitedly drunk and got killed by monsters. — The reason was that there were a lot of caseses when a youth tried to drink alcohol, then went outside town while being excitedly drunk got killed by monsters.

    it’s decided that the first time they would drank alcohol– it was decided that the first time they would drink alcohol

    At the time in japan, I thought become an adult is something that still a long way to go. — At the time in japan, I thought that becoming an adult is something that is still a long way to go.

    there’s something I want to ask to both of you — there’s something I want to ask both of you

    When the three of them almost finished ate their own — When the three of them almost finished eating their own

    Both of us, after finished eating — Both of us, after finishing eating

    how about your place of staying, — how about the place you are staying at,

    I can sleep outside without being noticed by monster — I can sleep outside without being noticed by monsters

    This far, because of the [Unfortunate], I can’t live at a place with a lot of people… desu. — Thus far, because of [Unfortunate], I couldn’t live at a place with a lot of people… desu.

    Runo-chan was always slept outside alone!? — Runo-chan was always sleeping outside alone!?

    But the is it? For being can’t be noticed by monster was indeed amazing right. — But is it? For being unable to be noticed by monsters was indeed amazing, right.

    was far stronger then what — was far stronger than what

    That’s an obvious result after lived alone since 11 years old. — That’s an obvious result after living alone since the age of 11.

    as long as its user didn’t looked directly — as long as its user didn’t look directly

    If you were being noticed by the opponent — If you were noticed by the opponent

    as you could stay out of their visibility, that would make you to be still quite hard for being found. — as you could stay out of their sight, that would still make you quite hard to be found.

    it’s an ability that very suited for assassination — it’s an ability that is very suited for assassination

    as you could hide without made any sound — as you could hide without making any sound

    But I don’t know whether hide-and-seek was existed — But I don’t know whether hide-and-seek existed

    I’m not particularly care — I’m don’t particularly care

    I’m not quite understand — I don’t quite understand

    What’s it, what happened!? — What’s this, what happened!?

    The tone was quite different with every response thus far! — The tone was quite different from every response thus far!

    I’m really sorry for asking about something that so trivial. — I’m really sorry for asking about something so trivial.

    apologize once more after secured an inn later. — apologize once more after securing an inn later.

    But, now I’ve sure about something — But, now I’m sure about something

    first from the person that hold it. — first from the person that holds it.

    Well, that’s only apply when there’s such enemy appeared. — Well, that only applies when such enemy appears.

    won’t need to worries about — won’t need to worrie about

    away after ate without paying. — away after eating without paying.

    Without I notice it, — Without me noticing it,

    that exactly the same thing with what I thought. — that’s exactly the same thing I thought.

    you should a bit more careful with your word. — you should be a bit more careful with your words.

    whether she was already opened up — whether she already opened up

    I think Runoir’s tone are become — I think Runoir’s tone became

    At first she was looked like shy — At first she looked shy

    Does the ‘desu’ word in each end of her sentences are some kind of habit? — Is the ‘desu’ word at the end of each of her sentences some kind of habit?

    I’ve never think about that way — I’ve never thought about it that way

    I’ve never ate and then run away without paying! — I never ate and then ran away without paying!

    Said “I’ve never ate and then run away without paying!” loudly — Said “I never ate and then ran away without paying!” loudly

    and then leave the restaurant. — and then left the restaurant.

    or the three of us were 40 coppers — or the three of us was 40 coppers

    to be quite cheap actually the most expensive one and made Lexa shocked. — to be quite cheap was actually the most expensive one made Lexa shocked.

    In the inn, my next room at the right side — In the inn, next to my room on the right side

    as for the left side was Runoir’s room — as for the left side it was Runoir’s room

    same room after just met a day would be quite hard. — same room after just meting a day ago would be quite hard.

    Even if it’s a next room — Even if it’s the neighboring room

    I think there should no problem — I think there should be no problem

    And then, after promised to went to the guild tomorrow early in the morning, we returned to our respective room. — And then, after promising to go to the guild tomorrow early in the morning, we returned to our respective rooms.

    that his body wasn’t felt comfortable, — that his body wasn’t feeling comfortable,

    like Lexa and Runoir also think the same thing — like Lexa and Runoir also thought the same thing

    again after just bid farewell by said — again after just bidding farewell by saying

    That make a really awkward situation. — That caused a really awkward situation.

    , laughing to the point hugging her own — , laughing to the point of hugging her own

    The hot water hadn’t brought — The hot water wasn’t brought

    Hope it helps.

    • thanks again for the correction but, when I was going to release it I think I’ve already enable the comment column though.
      and yeah, it seem almost half of it was because of my last edit before releasing it.

  • teoldeue

    cant wait for next chapie

  • Get rid of the Adfly bullshit.. i go there i wait it gets to 1 second screen turns grey i click it pops up windows and trys to take control of my webpages and load stuff onto my computer. please add in an option for adfly or Normal i know people want those cents. from adfly but its just an annoying site, cause i can’t even get to the damn translation.

    • everyone (aside from you) seems don’t have any problem with it though?

  • Thank u always for ur great work…
    ^^…